After our first viewing to our class we got feedback from other students and our teacher.
The main feedback we received was that there was no sense of narrative. Because our title sequence is meant to set up the storyline, leading into the main plot of the film it is important that it tells the story unlike other title sequences that may be quite abstract. As a result of this feedback we plan to film more football related shots as well as shots that establish the different settings. Another interesting idea we could do to make the narrative clearer is adding dialogue so the audiece will know exactly what is going on. Or better yet we could include images that will be intergrained in the title sequence whilst telling the audience what is happening e.g. newspaper reports.
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